your sentence structure is sometimes a little choppy which messes up the flow of your writing. you also have weird word order sometimes so I have to read over some phrases twice and that zed/syndra ask a while back was a bit too romanticized for a muse like Zed
roast me(or zed) . ACCEPTING . ✖ .
HMM I SEE I SEE. i can see the first thing tbh. and the second thing probably wont happen again. it was like seeing a box of chocolate and diving into it since I HELLA love zed.dra . i really dont rp zed as romantic ( my zed is demiromantic but hes borderline aromantic) ( i debate on making him aroace at times). but thanks pal . good 2 see others read my content.
also its good only THAT ASK was a complaint. if it were more than one itd be concerning. but like i said ! it doesnt happen much lol